Headstrong Heroine: Into the Veil

**I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review**

3.5/5—it hurts to rate this novel under 4 stars, but there are glaring grammar and spelling errors.

This is one of those stories that I really, really, really like. Part of me wishes I could let slip the other L-word. There’s a spunky heroine, tons of adventure, a dash of romance, a mystery, and magic. Unfortunately, the story outpaced the author.

While INTO THE VEIL is well-imagined and the characters are nicely developed, it’s impossible to ignore that an editor could have bumped this novel up to a 4. There were mistakes all throughout that distracted and confused me. That alone is annoying in the midst of a gripping scene…but the writing itself was patchwork. Not bad, just not cohesive. For instance, the writing is much less sophisticated in the first several chapters than in later chapters. I would go so far as to say it would appeal more to MG than YA, though later scenes amp up enough to warrant a YA label.

That being said, this novel wouldn’t rank a 5 for me, even with the help of an editor. I enjoyed how unique the world was, and I enjoyed seeing it through Lyric’s eyes, but there are several plot holes that hindered me from enjoying the story as much as I might have. Little quirks, like how the twins were “in hiding” but couldn’t even be bothered to hide their white-blond hair with a little dye, or their ice-pale skin with a touch of bronzer, bothered me. I mean, pink streaks? I get wanting to be rebellious, but at what cost? And that was just one example.

But with grammar and plot holes aside, there’s a lot to admire in INTO THE VEIL. The concept of veilwalkers being sages—a subgenre of witch that is almost extinct—is unique and intriguing. As is the budding romance between Lyric and Aiden. I do love moody men. *sigh* I wish I had a better grasp of what he looked like, to be honest, but his fierce loyalty combined with his sensitive moments are enough to make me swoon.

 And don’t get me started on the world! The mystery! The danger! It’s all so exciting, and it makes turning each page an adventure all its own. I can’t wait to find out more about Lyric’s mother and the scandalous affair that may or may not have resulted in murder. It’s like a magical soap opera, except without the bad lighting.

In all seriousness, I didn’t expect to be as attached as I am. I’m truly invested in Lyric, especially since by the end of the novel she feels so alone. I can’t lie: I just want to hug her. And possibly beat Aiden overtop the head with his own bad attitude. But if they kissed and made up, I’d totally be fine with that, too.

My hope is that in the following novels, Lyric comes into her own power. Maybe not magical power, but into some confidence and intrigue that will give her more footing in her dangerous world. When Gemma told her to grow up, it seemed harsh…but it was the truth. I’m excitedly looking forward to see if that happens.

Would I recommend INTO THE VEIL (except to my grammar-nazi friends)? Yes, because I think fans of paranormal fantasy will enjoy the unique world and spunky main character—but also because this is an outstanding example of indie writing. I only hope to find more authors like Jennifer R. McDonald!

Violently Beautiful: Throne of Glass

This book is sitting on my nightstand, next to three other novels. It will probably stay there until I lose the ability to read. I know that doesn't mean much to y'all, but having only four books on my 'favorite' list is...meaningful. Over the last ten years, I've read well over a thousand books. I mean that literally. I love, love, LOVE to read.

But only a very few, very rare books hit home. I'm not just talking about books that have brought out my emotions or made me think deep thoughts, but actually hit home. The impact is something you don't forget. Considering that, Throne of Glass definitely makes my favorite shelf.

The world is decline, almost completely overtaken by a cruel tyrant. Cool story, Bro.

There is a love triangle. Ugh. Neither guy would be my first choice, but whatevs.

There is a competition that moves the pace along like good, obedient plot device. Meh.

...but then there's Celaena. Forget everything else. Forget the magic-less mess of a world, the dueling heartthrobs, and the competition. None of that matters. I swear to you, the rest of the novel will fall away if you focus on her.

Not because the rest of the novel is bad, mind you. No, I don't mean that at all. But the rest of the novel has nothing on this one character. Of all the character-driven novels you've ever read, this one takes the lead. Celaena is my ultimate girl-crush.

She's not perfect. In fact, if Celaena had any more flaws she'd be useless as a champion. It was a razor-thin edge to walk, but she's *just* flawed enough. As contradictory as it sounds, Celaena's truly amazing. Not once did I ever think huh? why would she do that?--and that's rare. Writing an organic, original character is hard, which is why soppy, simpering idiots are the heroines in most YA novels. UGH.

The unwinding of Celaena's mysterious background, as well as her secrets, is also beautifully done. You won't find annoying info-dumps that bog down the writing. Sarah Maas knows what she's doing, and her skill kept me up 'til dawn, reading like a fiend.

I give this 5 stars--not because it's perfect, but because Maas has made me crave more. Seriously, I feel like a druggie waiting for my next hit. In my opinion, that's more valuable than a "perfect" novel.